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Chapter 245 - The Frenzy

🕑 Added 2021-05-19 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I had a few weird days and I'm trying to catch up on your suggestions.

RRoss

When even Naka calls your kills excessive, you know you've come up with something terrible

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Thanks to... the dwarves. The hunt went on " should be a comma. The plural of 'spawn' is 'spawn'. "bovines" should be "bovidae" (bovine is cattle). "not just from the quest, but also by the monsters inside" should be "from the monster" or "due to". I think "more than the largest number they faced" would be better as "they had faced so far". I think "last case scenario" would be better as "worst-case scenario". "spread around the plains, all made" shouldn't have a comma (or should have a comma before 'spread'). "shootout" should be "shot out". "kill all griffons but one" should be "all the griffons".


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