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Chapter 246 - Hidden Boss

🕑 Added 2021-05-22 00:14:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Sorry it took a bit of time to get around this. I thin that closer thing was a mistaken copy/cut lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "How strong they were?" should be "were they?" "anyone of us" should be "any one of us". I think "cried at once" might be better as "cried as one". "had highest the defense rating" should be "had the highest defense rating". "face light up" should be "lit". "number of griffons in the mountain" should be "on" or "around". I think "killed all griffons" should be "killed all the griffons". "wasn't nowhere near enough" should be "wasn't anywhere near enough" or "was nowhere near enough". I think "closer,~" isn't supposed to be there?


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