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Chapter 248 -Boon from the clouds

🕑 Added 2021-05-24 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks! The begrudgingly thing was very weird. I got like 5 different ways of spelling it XD

Tyler Babcock

Holy crap part of me wants that twist in the end to come true. But I also don't. More so because of my desire to see the characters happy

Mike G.

Good chapter, thanks! "Begrugendtly" -> Begrudgingly "Whit Hera's" -> "With Hera's"

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Any hopes she had from using that in a fight" would be better as "about using it". "They could have won" should be "might have won". I think "picking the feathers" would be better as "picking up". I think "you build just like" should be "build them just like". I think "Experience, the more I know" might be better as a full stop, colon or m-dash. I think "I tried everything that I could" should be "I'd". I think "no one expected" should be "no one had expected". I think "limit your capabilities" should be "limits". "Why they don't use" should be "Why don't they". "one of its ace students" should be "his". I think "to so-called hard mode for you to train" should be "the so-called hard mode for you to train for". "picked the baskets" should be "picked up" (x2). "Begrugendtly" should be "Begrudgingly". I think "returned the whistles" should be "turned over", since they didn't get them from Naka. "whit" should be "with". "You know how..." should maybe have a question mark. "Figuring all out" should be "that all".


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