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Chapter 249 - Hard mode dungeon

🕑 Added 2021-05-26 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Perizou

Oh no, it's not an system milestone. It's more like 'Oh look at that I got 400 achievements in my steam account' or something. the 20% is because each point above 10 increases what the stat does by 1% so at 30 she gets a 20% increase.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "back to earth" should be "Earth". I feel like "it was herself" might be better as "behind her was herself", if that's what that's trying to say? "some reason, It wasn't like" should be "it". "for barging in, “Blue" has the speech mark in the wrong position. I think "what it is all about" would be better as "what this is all about". "I wanted to be with someone" should be "want" or "want it". "size of my legs, “Blue scoffed" has the speech mark in the wrong position. Same for "your word for it, “Blue". "I there should be enough" should be "I think". I think "she missed something" might be better as "she had missed something" or "forgotten". I think "What is this, item box" would be better without the comma. I think "she never heard anything" should be "she had never heard anything".

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. Can you explain what Hera means by milestone in this passage? “After making the changes, every single stat was at 30. Still, this didn't feel like a milestone. For some reason, It wasn't like she had reached 50 or 100. The bonus she got because of that wasn't that special either. It was just a 20% increase to what each stat affected.” Is the 20 % for every time a stat reaches an increment of 10? I don’t remember hearing this type of milestones in the story before, so if it’s in a previous chapter than I must of missed it. Anyways keep up the good work. Can’t wait to the hard mode dungeon.


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