Leaqio.com
perizou from patreon
perizou patreon

Chapter 252 - Carrion

🕑 Added 2021-05-31 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

Comments

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Only after Pyrrick deployed a barrier blocking the wind that the smell subsided" would be better as "It was only...". I think "That one seemed much older" should be "This". "until the buff is out" should be "before". "taking an eye out of the monster" should be "off of". "no one replied" should be "No one replied". "scavenger ruler" should be capitalized. "all of her strength on the strike" should be "into". I think "Cloud appeared to block the attack" should be ".Clouds". I think "ripping one of them up" should be "off".

Mike G.

Go Naka!!


More Creators