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Chapter 253 - Nimbus

🕑 Added 2021-06-02 13:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Some of those mistakes were very bad. I guess I was really sleep deprived when I edited this chapter lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "a dozen of items from them to loot" should be "a dozen items for them to loot". "the mage's day" should be "the mages' day". "those new spells" should be "these" or "the". "pick them one by one" should be "them up". I think "Blue picked her whistle" should be "took out". I think "Despite the appearance" would be better as "Despite its appearance". "fluffy white, you would see" shouldn't have a comma. "They all also opened her wind boxes" should be "their". Should it be "Item Boxes"? I think "runs and tests it two things became clear" should be "runs and tests of it, two things became clear", maybe? "had used during the runs to avoid dealing what the rotting smell" should be "had used it... with the rotting smell". "I Don't know. We need to ask her." should be "I don't know. You'll need to ask her."


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