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Chapter 254- Nest

🕑 Added 2021-06-04 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The rank/rang thing is because on my keyboard the K and G are side by side. That's totally the reason and no one has any pictures to prove otherwise.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "if you know how to swim is less dangerous" should be "it's less dangerous". "grabbed the dwarf but her waist" should be "by". I think "On the wall, there was a new tunnel" should be "In". "A voice rank" should be "rang". I think "A tunnel in front of the captain would turn to the right before arriving at an opening" would be better as "The tunnel in front of the captain turned to the right before leading to an opening". I think "that answer the questions" should be "answers the question".


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