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Chapter 255 - Egg

🕑 Added 2021-06-05 13:01:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I was sure the physic thing was wrong but for the life of me I couldn't remember the right word lol.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "physic" should be "physique". I think "take the human out of its back" would be better as "get the human off of its back". "more and more frantic. Sending several spells" would be better as a comma. "in the worst mechanical bull" should be "on". I think "the Juvenile ruler" should be "juvenile", for consistency. "moonlight night" should be "moonlit". "by the pure strength" should be "with". "on the way" should be "in".


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