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Chapter 256 - New party member

🕑 Added 2021-06-07 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I rewrote that question so many times only to forget the question mark.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Why you didn't even" should be "Why didn't you even". "a break here" should be "there". "However. she wasn't" should be a comma. "Naka didn't take her eyes out of the griffon's head" should be "off of". "what are you talking about" should have a question mark. "Do not pry in my personal life" should be "into". "I picked the egg" should be "picked up". "feel it that way" should be "feel that way" or "feel that way about it".


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