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Chapter 290 - Perks of discovery

🕑 Added 2021-08-06 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Aldous Russell

Thanks! "That was counting with Boothudurn" doesn't need "with". I think "Not just by its size" would be better as "for its size" or "just its size". "early grey"/"gray" should be "Early Grey". "back on earth" should be "Earth". I think "gold per trip. The stations" might be better as a comma. I'm not sure about "she was talking", maybe "they were"? "Realocation" should be "Reallocation". "requirements to say evolution" should be "said". "she shrugged off" should be "it off". "tablet now. I can give you later" should be a comma or "you it". "a large crate on the side" should be "to". "get that information with them" should be "from". "everyone's tablet" should be "tablets". I think "flooded by information" might be better as "with".

Perizou

Well, not unlimited. She still doesn't have enough to build a giant penis and try to reach space.

Knightfire

Hera showed her inexperience. She has no clue over the value of a S graded skill. And she basically has unlimited funds now too.


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