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Chapter 291 - A loving family

🕑 Added 2021-08-07 13:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "They even had" might be better as "had even". "casting spells on earth" should be "Earth". "that the magic cause" should be "caused". I think "a girl who shouldn't be more" might be better as "couldn't". "to her parent's house" should be "parents' house". I think "and now I was" should be "I am". I think "to that person who" would be better as "a person". "the week, we found out" shouldn't have a comma. "That doesn't justify" should be "justify it". "She had enough" should be "had had". I think "annoying at best" would be better as "most".

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