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Chapter 292 - Seems about right

🕑 Added 2021-08-09 13:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "already the middle of the night" should be "already night", since it's only 8pm. "Even if her parents were older. They weren't" should be a comma. "Finally, your father insisted" should be a full stop. "what now" should have a question mark. "can you come here" should have a question mark. "Erida" should be "Eridan". I think "And if I may. I'm" might be better as a comma. I think "Good Mornin Burtois" should be "Good Mornin' Burtois". I think "putting herself a glass of wine" should be "pouring". "that He didn't need" should be "he". I think "with their lives'" Hera" should be "lives'," Hera". "in the stupid morning show" should be "on". "people on school" should be "in". "how could I get such an ungrateful daughter" should have a question mark. I think "since... with me. I don't" should be a comma. I think "there when she needed it" might be better as "needed her". I think "make things up with her" should be "make up".

Perizou

It wasn't easy to write that relationship. I'm glad that Hera realized that she didn't have to put up with Stella.

Theredscare77

Ok I’m glad that Hera finally stood up to Stella. She’s needs to get away from that toxic cesspool. Also her dad isn’t blameless either. Sure he’s not actively abusing her, but to let Stella do it all of Hera’s life without standing up to her is a big problem. Hopefully Stella gets some just desserts with how much of an abusive piece of crap she is. Anyways still loving your story, but I really can’t stand to see this type of abuse.


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