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Chapter 293 - Unfortunate coincidence

🕑 Added 2021-08-11 13:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Sorry it took me a while to get around to those. I had a weird couple of weeks x.x

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "and, if she ... MAZE. It wouldn't" should be a comma. "asked some time" should be "for some". "stepped on the back of the queue" should be "to the back". "prime minister kid" should be "prime minister's kid". "found two rooms, discover a civilization" should be "discovered". "she rather be called Blue" should be "she'd" or maybe "she goes by Blue". I think "an I ask your help about what" would be better as "ask for your help with". I think "explorer put a civilian" should be "puts" or "has put". "your explorers' privileges" should be "explorer's". "But then how can we..." should have a question mark. "murders would be in jail" should be "murderers". "didn't felt right" should be "feel". "While thinking about that, Becca found" should be "she was thinking". "If I'm being candid is all about" should be "candid, it's all". I think "how we call when we" should be "what we call it when". I think "chalk up this as" should be "chalk that up as". "a third big event. That is" should be a comma. I think "Why are you doing that" should be "this". "I don't think I have nothing to lose" should be "anything".


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