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Chapter 295 - The Order's Goals

🕑 Added 2021-08-14 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! You have a few "order" which I think might be better as "Order". "faster to asking me directly" should be "faster to ask" or "faster asking". "Did Ninleyn said" should be "say". I think "entire house for themselves" might be better as "to". "Alex was on the guild" should be "at". "in the doorway" should be "at". I think "on the corner of his eyes" should be "in". "created on her mind" should be "in". "created in plains" should be "on". "Conical" should be "conical". "can we focus..." should have a question mark. "If you wouldn't mind. Herbal tea" should be a comma. "nothing to apologize" should be "apologize for". "what are you searching" should be "searching for". I think "Is it the court" should be "Court" (and probably the other instances). I think "be exotic weapons, spells, and decorations" should be "be it exotic... or decorations" or "being exotic".

Perizou

hahaha, Yeah, but it can be delayed. Here, he wasn't in any danger, so the Herald just wanted to push his buttons.

Mike G.

That restriction could be... problematic... if he forgets and uses the legacy in combat. :)


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