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Chapter 297 - Ugly Feelings

🕑 Added 2021-08-18 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I kept the 'dog puppies' because Silah is still getting used to the mannerisms that humans have. It was an intentional 'mistake' of my part

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "still would be away" might be better as "would still". "and even using the most direct route. There were" should be "and, even... route, there...". "So, Instead" should be "instead". "she would get on Boothudurn" should be "to". "likely that we come back" should be "we'll". I think "a few months on my ex" should be "with". I think "On the next day" would be better as "The next day". "Hera, " That's another good" has an extra space. I think "I had more than enough money" might be better as "have". I think "and the order" should be "Order". I think "have is to use some" should be "is with using". I think "appeared on top of them" should be "above". "new skill window. Wandering" should be a comma. I think "everyone can use observe" should be "Observe". "I thinking I even" should be "think". "go spar on the guild" should be "at". I think "cute dog puppies" doesn't need "dog". "did you found out" should be "find". I think "through the order" should be "Order". I think "end up stop being" should be "stopping". "age toots" should have a comma.


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