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Chapter 299 - Enter Shane

🕑 Added 2021-08-21 13:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! So, Mylo's staff actually has a flower pattern. I added a color to the cloth to make that more clear. Some of the mistakes here hurt. I need to pay more attention during the edits x.x

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "the order" should be "Order". I think "It was 2:16 when Hera considered going" would be better as "and Hera was considering going". I think "black plugs earrings" should be "plug". I think "a purple staff with a floral pattern wrapped around some cloth" should be "a purple staff wrapped with a floral-patterned cloth". "Shane pulled her tablet" should be "pulled out". I think "I got just the assassin" would be better as "I've just got". I think "by 'accident by" should be "by 'accident' by". "when he arrived in front of the hotel. Hera" should be a comma. "I'm sorry, My king" should be "my King". "with the room service" should be "from room service". "this hit the spot" should be "that". I think "It had something to do" would be better as "has" or as "He said it had". I think "made by a drone" would be better as "taken". I think "positive that a member of the Court of Heroes could" would be better as "should", since she's positive. I think "You are going to be" would be better as "You're". I think "without a vacant expression" should be "with". I think "They left the hotel room leaving" would be better with a comma ("room, leaving"). I think "could she be talking about" should either have a question mark near it or be "she could be". I think "talk about buts" should be "butts". I think "before I forget. Later" should be a comma. "how they would be like" should be "what".


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