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Chapter 300 - Augmented Simulation Zones

🕑 Added 2021-08-23 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! And it still feels surreal to have reached 300 chapters lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! Congratulations on the milestone! I think "floors on the building" should be "in" or "of". "saw it on videos" should be "in". "arenas for sparing" should be "sparring". "freely ... without paying for it" feels redundant. I think "much similar to that of the system" would be better without "much". I think "you increase the time available" should be "you can". I think "comic book, a dark purple backdrop" might be better as "book, and a". I think "moving to position" would be better as "into". "on the purple armor" should be "in". I think "can answer to me" would be better as "respond" or "react". I think "on all small details" would be better as "on the small details".


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