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Chapter 302 - Bitter Medicine

🕑 Added 2021-08-27 13:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Took me a while to do this one but I should catch up today, sorry about that.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "as having his blood boiling" might be better as "as like having his blood boil". I think "just yet right" would be better as "just yet, right". I think "take these things off me" might be better as "get these things out of me". I think "about that idea" might be better as "the". I think "or we leave it to" might be better as "or will we", unless she has an accent. "dream catcher" should be one word. "kill those things" should be "these". "4 thousand" was four hundred earlier, I think? "you could see" should be "they". I think "a belt on her" should be better as "in". I think "are frustrated I will not" would be better with a comma ("frustrated, I"). I think "her mana. We should" would be better as a comma. I think "The answer didn't change" might be better as "My... hasn't changed". I think "how much they got it before" might be better as "how much of it they got before". "Perhaps, those" doesn't need a comma. "more than we imagined." is missing a speech mark. "those damn things" should be "these". "on Helena's mouth. To protect her" should be "in" and a comma.


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