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Chapter 304 - Explorer gossip

🕑 Added 2021-08-30 13:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Perizou

I agree but I honestly don't know what she will pick. Hera is a bit more reactionary. She makes decisions based on what's best for her at that moment and not what would help long term.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Iit was something similar" should be "It". I'm not sure how "This was great for a number of reasons" connects to the previous sentence. Would it maybe be better as "Delaying the team from setting out was useful.." or something? "on the Wailing Valley" should be "in". "the worse role" should be "worst". "All you mana" should be "your". I think "let down as I did" would be better as "I was". "back on the guild" should be "in". I think "I'm hiding from him" would be better as "hiding it from him". I think "Hera ever considered" might be better as "Hera had ever considered". I think "also come by with" would be better as "come with" or "from". I think "mana on the relic" should be "into". I think "They split off from the guild" would be better as "They split off after leaving the guild", or "They parted after leaving" or "parted outside".

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. I actually think that getting the controller skill would be perfect for Hera. She already has so much crowd control, poison, paralysis, burning, blinding, sneezing(?), and so much more. I’d imagine the controller spell buffing ailment mastery could lead to some absurd results. Crafter also seems promising. If she can use it to create different “poisonous” concoctions. She could make some that put monsters asleep, to intoxicate them, and so much more. She could also potential make even more potent poison and maybe incorporate it into her spells. Anyways thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work.


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