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Chapter 305 - Final preparations

🕑 Added 2021-09-01 13:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections. Some of those mistakes hurt x.x

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Mine came already at rank 5" would be better as "is already" or "started at". I think "I imagine that it would be things" would be better as "that would" or "could". I think "compendium of the skills" should be "compendiums". "exposed by those elements" should be "to". I think "on deeper layers" should be "in". I think "From the 20 compendiums" should be "Of". I think "Never once, Helena used any" would be better as "Not once did Helena use". "who was the lead" should be "has". "worked my ass out" should be "off". "quick and in the way" should be "on". "Touching her guild card in a sensor" should be "to". "Hera made some math" should be "did".


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