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Chapter 306 - Into the unknown

🕑 Added 2021-09-03 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Not really. Like there was a 'main road' but it's so small that you can walk from one side to the other in less than 10 minutes. And Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! Did the Kobold battlefield have roads? "unknow" should probably be "unknown". I think "Not this time, all" might be better as a full stop, colon or m-dash. I think "was anything missing was" should be "missing it was". "rose their hands" should be "raised". "Does this room counts?" should be "count". I think "I tried that remember" would be better with a comma ("that, remember"). I think "can know that you use it on them" might be better as "can tell when you've used it". "burry" should be "bury". "If you had so much" should be "have" or "get". I think "will be... something in whatever cuts" should be "could... on". "type flora and fauna" should be "types of". "same level of the" should be "as". "a white light became intense" should be "the". I think "lifting him out of the ground" should be "out of the snow" or "off the ground".


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