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Chapter 310 - Elemental Spirit

🕑 Added 2021-09-10 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "swing through honey" should be "swim". I think "it has been a long time" should be "had". "sprites homeland" should be "sprite's". I think "Hera's and Shane's spell" would be better as "Hera and Shane's spells". I think "and no one figured out a way" would be better as "has figured". I think "by no means" should maybe be "any". "coming after they" should be "them". "Those things are not real" should be "These" (x2). "weird way to run to hid" should be "way it ran to hide". "opening on the skin" should be "in". "almost as in response" should be "as if in". "the spider crawling" should be "spiders". "Nothing I can handle" should be "can't". "catching her breath" has an extra speech mark. "hidden among a bush" should be "in" or "amongst some bushes". I think "that everyone agreed" might be better as "agreed on".


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