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Chapter 277 - Long track home

🕑 Added 2021-07-14 13:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "just I see you later" would be better as "just 'see you later' ". I think "tears coming out of her face" might be better as "out of her eyes" or "rolling down her face", or something. "Your kidding" should be "You're". I think "and maybe. Just maybe" would be better as "and maybe, just maybe". "inclination" should be "incline". "They light up" should be "lit". "it seemed as it went off forever" should be "as if it".

RRoss

XDDD

GuyWhoReadsALot

Hey author. I feel the same way Hera does. Stop with this shit.


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