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Chapter 278 - Violent Greeting

🕑 Added 2021-07-16 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The only once a month line was bothering me but I couldn't figure out why.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Only once a month" would be better as "It was only once a month". "After the tunnel light up" should be "lit". "And what you suggest we do" should be "what do you". I think "Have some people staying here" should be "stay". I think "let some of the guards operating" should be "get some of the guards to operate", maybe. I think "in the work" would be better as "into". I think "Poisons spells" should be "Poison". "increased in the defense" should be "increase". I think "So, you got this right" would be better as "So, you got this, right".

GuyWhoReadsALot

Finally... Thank you.


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