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Chapter 280 - Catching Up

🕑 Added 2021-07-19 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "One on the city of Brinefront, another on Hazelpond" should be "in" (x2) "who were faster" should be "which". I think "recharged by a specific type of mana" should be "with". I think "a new product, batteries" would be better as a semi-colon, colon or m-dash. "in pristine conditions" should be "condition". I think "sent a few people off" should be "set". I think "it will cause problems" should be "would". "pulled a chair and sat on the table" should be "pulled up a chair and sat by the table". I think "no one ever saw, I remember" should be a full stop. "changes are bigger than it seems" should be "than they seem". "Do humans don't get new role skills" should be "humans not get". I think "Why is getting that new role skill" might be better as "Why are these new role skills" or "Why is getting these new role skills". "put on a request" should be "in". I think "on the bank app" should be "in". "How big are those rooms" should be "these". "to make people don't abuse that" should be "make sure". "you can't miss it" is missing a speech mark.


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