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Chapter 281 - Meeting the folks

🕑 Added 2021-07-21 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "If she had sold" should be "If she sold". I think "an elevator. Hera couldn't wait to see Silah's reaction to it" might be better as "elevator - Hera... to one". I think "Hera honestly wanted to do" might be better as "honestly had wanted" or "had honestly". "whatever while I'm waiting" should be "you're". I'm pedantic, but "tv" should be "TV". "on his head" should be "in". I think "but leaving some" might be better as "leaving out". I think "about how was this new civilization" would be better as "about how this new civilization was". "held back in some" should be "on". I think "too personal" might be better as "sensitive", or something. I think "dancing lessons in painting and pottery" should be "dancing lessons to painting and pottery". I think "to be about work" should be "being". "fasters" should be "fastest". I think "speak in graduations" should be "at". I think "was the girl wanted to give" should maybe be "who wanted". "dating be" should be "me". "For the record. I'm not" should be a comma. "I like that one" should be "this". I think "grandma Triss" should be "Grandma" (but 'grandma' on its own is fine).

Theredscare77

“That feeling of being worried about meeting your partner's parents... I can't say I'm familiar with that .-.” Same…… :( Anyways thanks for the chapter.


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