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Chapter 283 - Back to the mountain

🕑 Added 2021-07-24 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I changed the dungeon thing to 'created' since it wasn't there before

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "culture and costumes" should potentially be "customs". "and the other" should be "others". "let me add. You" should be a comma, semi-colon or em-dash. I think "in their own benefits" might be better as "benefit". "I imagined" should be "imagine". Should "dungeon I made" be "unlocked" or "conquered"?

Munirah Hutchinson

I would be genuinely interested in seeing if they try to strong arm or take advantage of the Dwarves of Boothudurn


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