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Chapter 284 - The new Sky Ruler Nest

🕑 Added 2021-07-26 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The proprieties thing was Grammarly trolling me U.U

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "information about the dungeon with" should be "from". I think "seemed widely different" might be better as "wildly". "We were there when we fought" should be "they fought". I think "pushed it forward" should be "pushed forward". I think "the dozen of griffons" should be "dozens" or "dozen griffons". I think "much interesting" would be better as "very" or "particularly". "proprieties" should be "properties".


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