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Chapter 285 - Human influence

🕑 Added 2021-07-28 13:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "gave the area an ominous feeling to it" would be better without "to it". "things can have turned to" should be "could... into". I think "seemed a nightmare" would be better as "seemed like it would be a nightmare". "single target, focused" should be "too focused". "popped on her mind" should be "into". "form mushrooms" should be "from". "yes mam" should be "yes, ma'am". "on its neck" should be "into". "Hera gasps" should be "gasped". "spikes shoot out" should be "shot". I think "started moving after Alex" should be "continued". "All the way the back" should be "at the back". "expecting eyes" should be "expectant".

Perizou

Damn, just a week? I hope you didn't lose any sleep because of the story lol. I'm really happy you are enjoying it! And don't worry about it, return when you can, and even if you can't, there is always the free version. I'm just happy you are following the story

Michael Hughes

It took me a little over a week to get here but I finished the chapters on RR yesterday. With them returning I just had to join up even though it is the end of the month. This story has been a great read and I love it so much. I am going to be a little busy but I will join up again in October to binge the next several chapters. One of the best stories I have read here. I love the worldbuilding and class system. See you all next time.


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