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Chapter 287 - Big decisions

🕑 Added 2021-07-31 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "waste time" should be "wasting". "complained that the human started" should be "did the human start". "If they agreed to being part of the Guild meant" should be "Agreeing to being". I think "bought or negotiated" should be "bought or traded for". "killed in sight" should be "on". "low lever explorer" should be "level". "in the wall break" should be "during". "whit" should be "with". "in the matter" should be "on". I think "It never goes away from that window" should be "It's never outside that window". "Vodka" should be lower-case. I think "keep our priorities" might be better as "keep our priorities straight". I think "can already see where" would be better without "already". I think "I wanted was to stay" should be "want is". "This can be complicated" should be "could". "Why we shouldn't" should be "shouldn't we".


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