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Chapter 657 - Plans that come together

🕑 Added 2023-05-12 13:00:59 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

I'm glad the fight works. I'm always worried that it gets confusing, especially when there is a lot of things going on. And thanks for the heads up. I mixed up who was who with the core thing and the angle was grammarly being sneaky lol

Jinx

Love the fight scenes you write, very well done and easy to follow. Some small corrections, during the fight you refer to Core when I assume you mean Frost. Also earlier the moss body that hit the tree I would assume had the Limb bend in a unnatural angle, not natural as written.


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