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MAZE - Chapter 1010 - Bricks and Booze

🕑 Added 2025-02-07 17:29:47 +0000 UTC

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Ending last chapter into beginning of this one works… but might be more satisfying rephrased on both ends better parity—nothing wrong with changing minds, mind: very normal, personable thing to do. But it is an oddly framed form of it, and might well do better describing Hera as unbelievably rich—without also undercutting her… monetary mindfulness. Anyways, infinite love. <3 Edit: the ‘, they would get in the Aerie’ sentence has an odd comma placement… probably better just cutting that fragment and attaching the preceding section to the sentence which follows with comma used as adjoiner.


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