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LTW B3: Chapter 40: Life and House Arrest

🕑 Added 2023-11-01 00:02:02 +0000 UTC

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Lone Immortus

Thank you for reading! c:

Thank you for the chapter!

Lone Immortus

Pride and deep-rooted biases can and will get in the way of progress, sadly. It's hard. I want Lone to get his dues from her, but I don't want to humanize her too much since I can't think of a scenario where Sofia would ever allow another Hamish lol. Walking that powerful sentiment back by letting her live would weaken Sofia's character, but making her relatable and deep, and then killing her would make Sofia seem unreasonable and less likeable. I came into the chapter with plans for Clari to accept, but it just seemed more natural for her to ask him to leave. The joys of being an author lmao.

Tetrisman87

Happy Halloween and many thanks for the chapter! Man that lady is crazy biased and also just plain crazy. She already failed to kill him, he's approved by the higher council, and more, and he offers a chance to make amends and she basically spits at him. You'd think someone that old would be able add 2 and 2 together... Well, excited for her bloody end, though it's a shame Lone won't get any skills out of her. Until next chapter o/!


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