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College Crush - Book 3 -Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2022-04-24 05:01:58 +0000 UTC

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Everson

Yes, will have some fun at the Olympia first...then some more "story development" chapters upcoming :) Thanks for the feedback.

A J

I see you have introduced the new element of conceitedness to the story. Like a sci-fi story, such amazing medical technology should introduce uncomfortable possibilities and choices, but they have mostly been avoided--independent wealth showing up at the right time, interacting with very few folks outside the relationship: where is Teresa's family, for example--but their use of the DNA power should lead to pain somewhere. Forcing Cam, choosing who gets it and who doesn't, and now the promise of exposure to outsiders creates posibilities for drama to go with the exciting muscle fetish scenes. We haven't seen real pain since Teresa and the girl at the cabin hurt Dee. Either pain or unwanted exposure seems likely....


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