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3rd Robin comic Work In Progress
🕑 Added 2024-11-25 10:30:04 +0000 UTCIn the first panel they're supposed to be talking about a book/movie Eileen has picked up from Robin's shelves. I'll add that dialogue later on, I'm trying to think of a book/movie that has similar elements to this comic.
EDIT: A design sketch for the ex girlfriend in question.
EDIT 2: Second page's sketch. Though I'll have to revise the dialogue for sure because I use "you know" and "well" too much.
EDIT 3: Third page's sketch. I haven't been drawing Robin's hair because I wasn't sure if I'm gonna give her a new haircut or something.
EDIT 4: First page ink.
EDIT 5: Page 2 ink.
EDIT 6: Page 3 ink. Also changed Eileen's face in page 2, bottom right face.
EDIT 7: Page one base colors and basic shading.
EDIT 8: Finished page one. I ended up having them talk about Shutter Island (spoliers for it ahead) since Robin will kinda pretend like she's doing fine with her cage situation but in reality she's losing her mind, which is vaguely similar to the plot of the book/movie. It's just supposed to be a little foreshadowing easter egg thing.
EDIT 9: Base colors for page 2.
EDIT 10: Basic shading for page 2.
EDIT 11: Finished page 2.
EDIT 12: Base colors for page 3.
EDIT 13: Basic shading for page 3.
EDIT 14: Finished page 3. I'm gonna tweak a couple of things in all three pages amd I'll post them for all tiers.
EDIT 15: Page 4 sketch. I tried my best not to make the reveal of the "ex" character too jarrying, it's a wacky concept and it can very easily feel sudden and out of nowhere. Hopefully I did ok, but if you have feedback about that feel free to share!
EDIT 16: Page 5 sketch.
EDIT 17: Page 6 sketch.
EDIT 18: Page 4 ink.
EDIT 19: Page 5 ink.
EDIT 20: Page 6 ink and a couple of tiny adjustments to page 5.
EDIT 21: Page 4 base colors.
EDIT 22: Page 4 basic shading.
EDIT 23: Finished page 4.
EDIT 24: Page 5 base colors.
EDIT 25: Page 5 basic shading.
EDIT 26: Finished page 5.
EDIT 27: Page 6 base colors.
EDIT 28: Page 6 basic shading.
EDIT 29: Page 6 done. I changed the dialogue because I didn't like it after re-reading it.
EDIT 30: Page 7 sketch.
EDIT 31: Page 8 sketch. Might tweak the dialogue a bit.
EDIT 32: Page 9 sketch.
EDIT 33: And a small extra page to end the comic.
EDIT 34: Page 7 ink.
EDIT 35: Page 8 ink.
EDIT 36: Page 9 ink.
EDIT 37: Page 7 base colors.
EDIT 38: Page 7 basic shading.
EDIT 39: Page 7 finished.
EDIT 40: Page 8 base colors.
EDIT 41: Page 8 basic shading.
EDIT 42: Finished page 8.
EDIT 43: Page 9 base colors.
EDIT 44: Page 9 basic shading.
EDIT 45: Finished page 9.
EDIT 46: Extra page ink.
EDIT 47: Extra page base colors.
EDIT 48: Finished extra page.
Comments
DeprivedArt
Glad the joke landed for you, I wasn't sure if it was just gonna come off as very dumb
Hellerus
did i read the "Lego Yoda CBT" correctly on the bonus page.... banger joke love it
DeprivedArt
Thank you! I'm pretty happy with these
Kyle Redmond
This looks really hot, good job. Can't wait to see the finished product
DeprivedArt
I'm looking forward to drawing it too, it's a fun concept
Alexis_Egg
I’m excited to see more Robin love this comic
