DeprivedArt
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Text placement
🕑 Added 2025-03-09 11:48:01 +0000 UTCDo you think it reads how I intend it to? I don't know if it feels natural/normal to read the "it's not fair" before the "what's that, cutie?".
I don't know, I feel like the curved line the bubbles form is decently easy to see but maybe it's not enough to make you read some bubbles in the oposite order.
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DeprivedArt
Haha yeah but maybe for this sort of comic is even more important for the reading experience to be smooth and don't take you out of what's going on in the story
Yakkish
To be fair.. I don’t think any of us are ever reading these … ONLY once >.>
DeprivedArt
Thank you. I might end up changing the placement
Alexis_Egg
For sure took me a read or two but I liked it
