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🕑 Added 2025-01-11 20:00:07 +0000 UTCAlmost 20k words! woooo! Thanks for reading.
I might be moving next week or the week after, so there might not be a chapter next week. I'll still be writing but getting an internet connection might not be easily possible.
Comments
Benjamin Meyers
The more I read this, the more I think Mark should become a true villain, not a playacting one. The systems of power in the world are beyond screwed up. They are already playing games of their own to benefit themselves potentially to the disadvantage of people everywhere. What matters to the powers that be is that they remain the powers that be. Kill all monsters is right, even if they're human.
Nathan moi
Damm i binged everything in a week and i'm left wanting for more 😫.
Rylee Richter
You could look into starlink, although it’s quite pricey
Rayse
I read between the chapter where Tartu stomped Mark to here, and this was damn satisfying. I wonder if the focus will turn to just how terrifying Union is in the "wrong hands"?
ciopo
Great chapter! I have this ballsy insane idea, it would be hilarious if they plot an heist with Credenza to steal the 40 tons of "can't be used" adamantium
Robert H.
God, I wish I could like this chapter more than once. It was just so, utterly, viscerally satisfying to see him reach his breaking point. Obedience/Freedom? Absolutely fantastic, and I loved how vivid the imagery was in your writing.
Whaler Whaler
My God, what a great chapter. Haven't felt this riled up since Debbie's red lightning chapters. Seriously, great work Arcs
Ben Nikel
Damn! Now that's a hero show. ...I feel like Tartu is gonna get a lot of undeserved hate here. But also, his entire team just got completely curbstomped. Additionally, "Miss Masher?" Alas, poor Sally. I do like the Power Girl costume though.
FeelingsandFoibles
Call him ShavalliVein the way he'd be ingesting it
FeelingsandFoibles
Omfg i fucking loved that!!! Mark was so bad ass!!! Yesss! Can't wait to see the responses to that moment of his!
Allan Miller
I think if you started a go fund me to pay a professional drivers service to drive you to internet and back you’d get it in a day.
Allan Miller
That was freaking amazing. Seriously well written last chapter.
Dog City
I'm so mad! Darn you for riling me up before bed!
DuB
Woah.
Uroš
Damn this chapter made me angry. I'm still shaking. They got off too lightly at the end! Way too lightly. Should have cut off everyone of Tartu's team memember's feet off and let them walk on stumps. Should have made Tartu drink that drug-laced coffee, make him taste his own medicine. Fuck I just want tartu drugged with that accursed drug for a month straight, straight into his veins.
s476
Also hoping for some proper problems in t-boys future ^^
s476
Great chapter, hope we get the next one next week :D
Tom
Indeed.. what is happening at the collective! Not sure why Freyala not intervened, unless there's some meta plot going on preventing them / the whole thing was a setup for Mark to show why people really should mess with him
Brandon Maguire
I hadn't even considered the use of union in such a way. No wonder it's been hinted as being mind control adjacent. Oof. Loved it!
Bruno Correia
Please, i need more chapters. I could die this week and miss then
Cameron C
I hope a chapter next week because this one was so fucking cool. But totally understand if life gets in the way. What a freaking banger!! Domination // free will? Fuck! Union is really cool
Arcs
it's actually the house i was going to move too anyway, which is now in a recovering disaster zone. they have power, but they might not have water, and i need to get internet in a different way
s476
Also best wishes
s476
Where u moving that an internet connection might be a problem even via hotspot?