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adblood 39 - start of book 3
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Pixelblade
Lola is such a wonderful character
DeadicatedReader
It's good to be back! This looks to be a very interesting book. Page 11: The second floor was the bedrooms. -> third floor was the bedrooms as second floor was the gym and adamantium experiments and the third was unmentioned of the four stories. Page 12: Life.It seemed -> missing space Page 13: Sally laughed. “He’ll gonna blow you out of the sky!” -> He's or He'll blow or leave it as is cause direct speech can do weird things for the sake of it Page 14: but he knew him as much as Mark wanted to know hom. -> him page 54: you might be betting Quests from all of the gods -> getting instead of betting
