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Harry Potter and the Shattered Ring Chapter 8 (Ranni, The Witch)

🕑 Added 2024-10-25 13:54:06 +0000 UTC

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oWell

This Harry is before the Fourth Year and After the Third Year, and what you pointed out is a mistake on my part. Thank you for pointing them out.

Jonathan Davis

Firstly, I am enjoying your story quite a bit. However, I'm a little confused about timing. If Sirius isn't mentioned as one of Harry's major losses or traumas (or Cedric for that matter), and Hermione is actually writing meaningful summer letters to Harry, then this takes place at the latest during the summer before 4th year. However this chapter cites Harry's knowledge of Mundungus, and later there's a comment about the Order (book 5 stuff). I'm totally fine with "forget what you know, it's AU," but generally in those cases we get some effort to explain the differences between worlds.

oWell

I'm happy to hear that.

DarkLightKage

Just caught up. I really like this story!


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