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Going Native: Taste of Death

🕑 Added 2019-10-28 16:01:27 +0000 UTC

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CB-Otaku

Mhm... plus Tarble has a problem with just going with his instincts. Bardock pointed it out, and we saw he had to focus and really concentrate just to figure out that he already knew how to fire energy blasts and fly. It's entirely possible that he fudged up the Kamehameha by overthinking it, focus to much on how it looked in his head rather then feeling it out with his saiyan instincts. Still impressive what he did manage to pull off tho.

Neruz

Goku had a teacher though, there's a big difference between learning a technique you are taught and making it up from just a vague impression of what it should look like.

CB-Otaku

Really enjoyed the little political segment in the beginning. Making Lil' Vegeta the pov character was a great choice, letting you flesh out the setting without it feeling like an info-dump since Of course a child would need the finer details explained. I like how you are developing King Vegeta as a canny politician, while Kid Vegeta being so protective/possessive of his brother but trying not to show it... well it's just very endearing. AS for Bardock, I like your take on him. Very pragmatic, and while he is not blinded by his pride you can still tell it's there. Tarble's conflicting instincts are also very interesting to watch. Like giving up his air tank to Fasha, the person who's paid the most attention to him, is a very human gesture- but it doesn't fit the Self-centered Saiyan mindset that his education is trying to instill in him so he has to immediately justify it to himself. TLDR; I am really enjoying the story and am eagerly awaiting the next update :D

Mkaius

Hopefully the kamehameha will bring with it memories of other attacks and maybe ki sense as well eventually.

IdeasGuy

Eh, calling it a kamehameha gives it a little too much credit. It wasn't focused -- it was the equivalent of shaking up bottle and popping the top in the direction you wanted.

Stevie57

Great chapter and looking forward to the next part of the story. Kinda surprised he was able to use a kamehameha on his first attempt but guess it was the desperation of the situation.


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