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Going Native: Loss of Touch (ch.30)

🕑 Added 2020-03-30 14:54:43 +0000 UTC

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Ao Black

Tarble's reasoning is sound, and actually taking prisoners wouldn't have made sense, since the war was going for about 6 years by now and the reach must have used the tactics he talked about enough that it just became Standard Operating Procedure to take no prisoners. A great chapter overall, Elery being adorable and Tarble's growth were good to see. Can't wait for the upcoming family reunion.

Kabir Kumar

This was good, though there seem to be more spelling errors than usual.

Ronin Katarn

I'm actually looking forward to what comes next. Cause either King Vegeta is going to make an ass of himself by trying to assert his dominance on Tarble, who is by this point the strongest Saiyan alive, or by pissing off Freiza by pulling his current favorite monkey from the frontline where hes needed most. Its gonna be interesting to see what happens and I can't wait for it.

Darkarma

Perhaps have a "Frieza Says" sort of infomercial like from Starship Troopers the Movie. Frieza demonstrating why they are the Heroes because the prisoners are mind-controlled. "Ohohoho! Why are these poor people locked up you ask? Its because the reach have their fleshhooks burried in this poor father. Why if I told him his daughter had betrayed the reach, he'd just kill her with his bare hands with a smile. Its rather horrifying. This is what we're saving you from." -Cue clip-

TinyDeath

Pretty sure Tarble is currently the strongest Saiyan around, period, even outside Wrath State. At least of those still affiliated with Planet Vegeta and the Frieza Force anyway. I doubt King Vegeta has gotten much stronger, if he has at all. Actually, isn't their culture based on strength? As the strongest, not to mention a Royal, doesn't Tarble have the right to rule the Saiyans if he wanted to? Not that I think he would at this point. And he'd probably have to challenge his father first, but it's an interesting thought. Probably has to do with either the Wrath State or his little rebellion against Frieza, maybe both. I just can't wait to see Tarble blast a hole through this dude's head.

Templar9999

Tarble was around 13,000 at base 2 years ago. Even assuming no more massive zenkai gains he still likely increased to at least 15000 at base. Maybe even to 18000. The same as canon vegeta during the saiyan arc. Significantly more than than vegeta sr. With wrath state that puts him higher than canon ginyu's 120,000. And places Tarble squarely in the realm of the best of the Frieza Force. While still coming no where close to even 1% of Frieza's power. Elery is absolutely adorable. And I absolutely love the confusion of her trying to get how her favorite super hero is based on her brother, without connecting the dots. Regarding the difference in frame of mind. I think it would be better to have the examples of what happens when they take prisoners during Tarbles thoughts on the matter, rather than after. Particularly, focus on not just the mass casualties they commit, but that what is left of reach victims are little more than puppets. Nothing left to save. It would simultaneously make the military decision become more logical, without making it seem like Tarble stopped caring at all.

Blair Shirley

God I love Elery as a character, she's so adorable. Tarble better protect her smh

Blair Shirley

Not just in his Wrath State, but likely even in base. Tarble was around 13,000 in base, and King Vegeta has been sitting on his ass for like 6 years now, and its hinted that his former PL was only like 12,000. Training can give some really good gains, but in DBverse its the fights themselves where characters are really able to make progress, even without the Saiyans' zenkais. I could see Vegeta Sr at best being like 14,000 currently, but he is probably rusty as hell.

Kevin Choi

I wish Tarble had spoken about Leek when questioned about no surrender. Im sure his tv show would have added a tear jerking arc about Leeks death and then faceoff against tarble as a scarab

Lers

Hmm interesting King Vegeta is recalling Teach and Tarble back to home. It must be a important subject or task to withdraw the strongest fighters from their front. If i have to guess it has to do with the new generation of saiyans. Isn't Tarble technically stronger than King Vegeta in his Wrath state.

IdeasGuy

That was the idea originally, but executing prisoners is kinda...much. Wasn't sure if I would get in trouble with mods over at SB or SV, so I didn't want to take the risk. Instead, I tried to show Tarble be used as a mobile reusable nuke would make up for pulling that punch, but it seems I've missed the mark a bit.

Gordon Freemason

Is it bad that a crossover fanfic is more entertaining than actual publications? Probably.

Johnvsworld

Having at least one example of what Reach prisoners tried to do would help with this chapter, I think. Readers who are familiar with them can probably imagine it, but I think there are a fair few who aren't familiar with the Reach's part of the DCU.

Eldar Zecore

Elery*

Eldar Zecore

Elery*

Eldar Zecore

I actually really really want it to be because he tries to do something to Erely

Eldar Zecore

I really want Tarble to beat Vegeta Sr. Ass. I don’t care the reason, I just want to see it done 😄

CallOut4

Interesting


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