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Be a Dragon: Spiteful Mistakes (ch.4)

🕑 Added 2020-03-04 16:02:27 +0000 UTC

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Douglas Karr

While I can understand him being a non combatant and new to the dragon body I kinda felt he barely got out of that fight with his ass not getting kicked

Ab9999

ngl, cant imagine her wanting anyone besides naruto.. but w/e ideasguy is a warlock and uses dark magics. Also she would sooner stab/poison/explode/annihilate him then have sex with an unknown stranger; the way through her pants(at least one that doesnt end with the character's likely death) is a long windy road :L

Garend

Because she would pine for her stolen good end. Which makes the proces of fucking her more difficult than encouraging a clean break.

Garend

Fresh start, bonding fuck coming up?

John Bose

I’m liking the story so far, but I wonder why he doesn’t just tell Hinata what happened. I know I’m the previous chapter it was stated that he didn’t want to “overload” her with new info and essentially tell her she’s a fictional character. But couldn’t he spin it as a sort of “vision” or something? The premise of this story is Waifus so I imagine he’ll meet plenty more displaced characters and can do something similar. I’m wondering about this since it seems a lot of Hinatas regrets/sadness stems from the fact that she doesn’t know what happened after she died. By informing her of what he knows, and the fact that Konoha was essentially given the Good End to end all Good Ends, she can me be forward. Both in her new life and in here new Subject of adoration: Neo.

Mkaius

Were the villains just out murdering people for fun? Or were they doing so as a distraction? Is this death toll the norm for super clashes?

Pi

Cool flames. "I cup checked Mammoth as hard as I could, earning a strangled gasp from the giant of a man but he didn’t let go, though he did stop squeezing. Naturally, I cup checked him again, harder this time." hard as you could, then even harder?


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