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Be a Dragon: Troublemaker Version 2

🕑 Added 2020-04-29 14:42:16 +0000 UTC

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Nevets309

I like it, it dose help with her character development, and I know very little about neo so always a good thing

IdeasGuy

The goal was to flesh out Neo's character and to provide context for her actions. So, rather than a frothing at the mouth psychopath, I was hoping I made it clear that Neo was self-destructing. The one person she ever cared for is dead and she can't even get vengeance for his death. I won't say she was trying to commit suicide or anything but her mentality was 'fuck it.' I was also hoping to show off that she does have good points. Like her intense sense of loyalty the moment Hinata decided to not cut her loose even though it was objectively the smarter option. Or how methodical she was with robbing the bank. It also displays what abilities she offers to the team because those abilities come with a ruthlessness that someone like Hinata doesn't have. And it establishes something -- Neo is staying because of Hinata rather than Nero. Neo believes that she owesHinata for not leaving her, so Neo is going to start helping Hinata out with certain things. Or, from a certain point of view, HALPING.

Garend

Well, it's... more fleshed out. But I don't think it really needed it.


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