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See No Evil: A Rock (ch. 2 Draft)

🕑 Added 2020-07-01 15:11:24 +0000 UTC

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IdeasGuy

It's the ability to combine things to get a either different or improved thing. He's using it to combine to broken items into one complete item, but it could also be used to do something like combining a taser and a baton and end up with a shock baton. Or if he combined a gun, a garden hose, and an ice machine, he would end up with a gun that shoots ice.

IdeasGuy

Vergil has intense protective instincts, almost to the point of extreme. At that moment, he was trying to protect himself and Tifa. Killing him wasn't something that he wanted to do, but it was something that he felt like he had to do. Whether it was true or not. To Vergil, the guy was a potential threat when they were already in over their heads. Leaving him alive and conscious was a risk. Again, doesn't really matter if it was true or not, but Vergil felt like it was a risk so he removed the risk.

Kabir Kumar

Unless he's become a psychopath, killing people shouldn't be that easy. Especially to the face. https://youtu.be/zViyZGmBhvs

Antares

What's his power, didn't really get it. Is it some sort of gamer power or something?

Christian

This is shaping up pretty nicely, it feels more intense than the old version and I’m enjoying the action

Eldar Zecore

I don't know why, but I feel that these first two chapters are much better written compared to your original first two Dragon story chapters. Also, even if it wasn't meant to be taken this way, I am treating Jack's comment about street preforming as a reference to your incomplete Spiderman/DC story on FanFiction.com.

araconos

Looks good! Already enjoying this version a lot more. Im going to refer to his cards as 'the deck of many things' no matter what you name it though.

MasterMarx

That deck of cards is going to be *very* interesting down the road. Nice chapter overall, as well!


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