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Be a Dragon: A Rose with Thorns (ch. 17)

🕑 Added 2020-06-17 14:57:46 +0000 UTC

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Antares

I don't agree that his behaviour is "realistic" because it presumes that everyone or nearly everyone would behave as Nero does, which I don't think they would. His entire physiology has changed, which might have had a change to his mentality and on top of that he has insanely powerful reality warping abilities. Even if those abilites are bare-bones at the moment he could have done better. I don't like Nero, in a lot of ways I feel he is for a lack of a better word too "passive" as well as somewhat of a coward. Also felt that his "battle" with Rose was so poorly done and her winning just annoys me.

Highfist

I am glad you are restarting this fic the Mc is just super annoying and unlikeable

Blair Shirley

Contrary to some others it seems, I really enjoy Nero's personality. Its realistic and brings with it perks and flaws, such as his sometimes hypocritical thought processes. IMO, you've done a pretty good job with him so far. I also see why you had Rose act like the bad guy here, she believed that Nero needed to move past his trauma, whether that involved him determining to be a "hero" or not, and she thought that the best way to do that would be to push him hard, and in many senses it worked for her. Good chapter imo

Redone

I don't understand why he is accepting this scenario. If his motivation is to not get involved in this kind of thing, but he's training in case it happens anyway, shouldn't his goal in that scenario be to escape? Why would he play along? He also decides he'll pass on additional training for the day, then immediately accepts additional training. Why? Because Rose was rude to him? Also didn't like Rose in this chapter, she was being very antagonistic for no reason.

Antares

Ye him losing like that because of the retarded "heroes don't kill nonsense" bothers me a lot. When she goes on about how heroes don't kill Nero should have replied with "I'm not a hero". I also doubt something like a knife would take that Nero he's not a human and on top of that he's a reality warper. Sorry to say but I really didn't like this chapter. Always felt DC heroes were far too forgiving.

0 Jordinio 0

I'm with you. Seriously, I don't get what the point of any of this was? Nero is such a little bitch it's unreal. Can't he turn into a massive fuck off dragon? Why not just do that and grab her, simple as that. Instead, he pussyfoots around, whines internally, comes up with the most stupid uses of his powers, whines internally some more, freezes up, acts like a little bitch and let people just walk all over him. Compared to Jericho, Nero is such a loser.

CallOut4

Its not fact that he lost "technically" even though he won "spirit wise" that bothers me.... The fuck... Its how she handled the situation.

CallOut4

....Doesnt that just make her a sore looser?

DoctorTortoise

After this chapter... I have to say I'm *really* glad this is starting over... Well written, but Jesus Christ. Nero is one of the least likeable main characters I've ever read 😱


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