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Be a Dragon: A Rose with Thorns (ch. 17) (Final Chapter)

🕑 Added 2020-06-24 14:58:53 +0000 UTC

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Aoiishi

It's too bad this won't continue since I really like people exploring Raven and here you have her considering a relationship with him. Not to mention your smut with her was great. I will say that his unwillingness to confront his problem and be proactive wasn't as grating to me likely because you explained where his hesitance came from. However, hearing that he'd just abandon the DC world along with some of his waifus makes me happy you didn't continue because I'd likely rage at that point.

BruhBruhBear

Too bad it is ending, in my opinion you've written your best smut scenes yet in this fic. However, I think the drama of killing the family overshadowed too much too quickly and overwhelmed any other plot (besides the smut plot, that was top tier). That being said, I think it was a decent fic. You're damn good at developing characters, and when using the generic R34 ruleset + dragon dick it is hard to balance that out with the harem + plot. I personally think R34 fics are all destined to die before completed, they introduce too many main characters too quickly.

IdeasGuy

Basically Nero just looks at DC and the mess he made out of it and just bails to One Piece. There would have been a poll to see who he takes with him, but there would have been the occasional check-in to see how things were going.

Forsee2

Too bad this ends, the later chapters sound fun especially all the waifus. I am confused on one thing. You say Nero would grow from his meekness to becoming a dragon in full but at the end he runs from his new life to a brand new world. Is this a "oh god what have I become" moment or "Shit keeps piling up on me so peace out everyone"?


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