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See No Evil: Coal (ch. 6)

🕑 Added 2020-08-05 15:20:45 +0000 UTC

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Shinra D Scaryweather

Welp that escalated quickly

Anthony Maxwell

I think he should have gotten some body armor and fused it with his clothes. Also I kind of thought the main character might have some type of super powers of his own that aren't related to the cards. Like him having a healing factor or being bulletproof or something. Because in the earlier chapters it kind of sounded like he might have some type of superpower that's just not obvious.

Garend

Well fuck you too budy. Are you seriously trying to tell me that in an organisation he was forced into joining by killing several of it's members after they tried to kill him, body armour shouldn't be his first investment? Are you a lemming? If you are in high danger of being shot, you get protection against being shot. This is not complicated. This is basic, first move, first priority shit.

TinyDeath

Unless I misunderstood, then I believe your math is wrong. 10% of $100,000 would be $10,000. Divided by 4, it would be $2,500. If he only keeps 50% of that, then he'd make $1,250. The only way $5,000 would work, is if the total amount is $200,000 and he gave all of his share to Penguin, $400,000 if he kept $5,000 and gave Penguin $5,000. Or if all 4 of them got 10% of $100,000, then he'd get $10,000 total, $5,000 of which could go to Penguin. However, based on the way he explains it, that doesn't make sense.

Eldar Zecore

To be fair, its not like he was aware enough to grab either the money or the drugs before he'd already been shot and the situation had gone FUBAR. Maybe if he was still holding the bag, but both bags were in an open, exposed area at least a step away from where he got shot. Also, consider that he has maybe one witness (Joseph), its not like the Penguin can actually blame him for what happened.

Alexander S

I hope he remembered to grab either the money or the drugs. Because this will be the second time he went out with a bunch of Penguin mobsters and came back empty handed with everyone else dead. At this point the Penguin would be right to think he being fucked with. I’m also not a huge fan of the character’s zoning out in the middle of a drug deal, to say nothing of the lacklustre performance compared to last time he was put in a similar situation.

Gordon Freemason

Fun chapter, ignore Garend, he's a twat

Garend

Reading this chapter, I was really getting pissed off because that's not how that little amount of weed is handled at all. You can put that much in a backpack and just drive around mateys house to sell it one on one. A local dealer with a relatively small amount of buyers can go through that much in less than a month. Also, this MC is a fucking moron. If you're working for the mob, and not wearing a vest, on the way to a drug deal... you deserve everything you get. One of the first things he should have done is chased down some ratty third hand protections and meld them together. This is DC verse, and this sort of shit expected in Gotham. Frankly, he deserves that bullet wound and more.


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