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Power Corrupts: Dirty Dealings (ch. 44)

🕑 Added 2020-08-08 15:01:23 +0000 UTC

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IdeasGuy

For Skyrim, I'm breaking the story into four 'arcs' with mini-arcs making up each arc. This arc is titled 'Ascension' and it's broken up into three mini-arcs 'Falkreath, Mystery, then Riften.' After that, you have the 'Breakthrough' which is comprised of 'Greybeard, College and Experimentation'. Then, after that, we have the Moot which is its own self contained mini-arc. There will be two more arcs before we have the confrontation with Alduin. Writing that out, it sounds like a whole lot but each mini-arc is between two-five chapters. So we're actually not that far off from the Breakthrough arc. As for Jericho -- he'll handle this mess in his own way. Because, in the end, he's the one that knocked the first domino over. Even if he didn't mean to.

Benjamin Lawton

It's why I do this every chapter, so you know where corrections need to be made.

IdeasGuy

Yeah, writing on a phone is especially painful with Skyrim names. Thanks for pointing that out.

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

So the entire line of succession gone, so now he'll be the new Jarl? Only known Thane, and great benefactor of Falkreath. Guess that solves the whole issue about him controlling Helgen pretty much outright, in a sense. But makes it much harder to gain full control. What a mess xD PS. Also quite possible he will be suspected in the long run. Considering the hate he showed him. But the gold went back to the MC, and now he can spend Falkreath's budget wisely. Fixing the larger issues he created, also Dengeir died an innocent man thanks to him machinations. I wonder if he will reflect sufficiently on that? Or will he just find a way to resurrect the man? If I could, I would. And give him a chance to live out the rest of his life in luxury, but out of the way, as a sort of apology - After explaining why I did what I did, and why it was so important. Still hope you follow the story you originally set and go to winterhold tho. He needs support magic to boost his combat abilities. And to learn better enchanting.

Benjamin Lawton

*snorts* Bohemia instead of Boethiah. No doubt unintentional, but damned if it's not hilarious all the same. (Similarly, looks like Auto-Corrupt went and turned Lili's Artel Assist into "Aerial Assist". Oh, and the Oblivion PC's hometown is spelled "Kvatch", BTW.)


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