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See No Evil: Pressure (ch.7)

🕑 Added 2020-08-12 14:56:36 +0000 UTC

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Douglas Karr

Huh, was it loot burn kill or kill burn loot?

dg co

Real asshole corrupt cops. Nice

IdeasGuy

Thank you! And yeah, I'm hoping to eventually. I have some ideas, but most of them are DC centered. Given that all but one of my major stories take place in DC, I'm going to be tapped out on the setting by the time one of my stories finish up.

Dre'

You have a real talent for creating dynamic and interesting characters. This guy, Tarble, and Jericho are all very likable, if a little dark. Do you think you'll ever make an unabashedly heroic character as well?

IdeasGuy

Big part of it is Vergil is hyper focused on his debt and keeping his ability to combine things a secret. And, much like gacha games, the real good shit is locked behind a paywall. For Vergil to get the items that you're suggesting, he would have to grind them up to around a C-Rank and require certain types of materials. He's stuck at street level, but the next arc is where he gets the time and money to really start leveraging his powers.

IdeasGuy

That's pretty much what the next arc is. the first two arcs have been about setting Vergil up as a character pretty much destined to fail either by the actions of other people or his own, but the third is about him retaking the reins to his life. I wouldn't call it slice of life exactly, but Vergil get a much needed break.

IdeasGuy

Temptation mostly. It's easier to not take something when it's not there in the first place.

Darkarma

I'm a bit surprised he didn't just take a bottle of pain killers just so he can use them with his cards. See if he can combine them with something else to make something doesn't have the same problems or something he can sell for a lot more.

Darius_Black

I gotta admit, I'm wondering how much lower your gonna get with this until you hit "rock bottom". Because I'll be honest, it's starting to feel grimderp/dark. Like, the MC keeps getting kicked while he's down and can't seemingly get out of it, even when he does the best he can. The original premise of the story, as I understand it, was a journey from nothing. But the MC started at nothing, and keeps getting lower. It's getting frustrating, waiting for something to go right, even if its temporary. Setback after setback makes the plot harder to get invested in. It's not technically that far into the story, but with how long the sections are, it feels much longer. Anyway, this was long winded, but I'm essentially saying I feel like you need to give the MC some kind of tangible progress before it starts to feel like he's the universe's buttmonkey.

Blair Shirley

Great chapter! I'm really liking Vergil's character so far, and his actions are being reasonable. You've done a good job at capturing "A Dragon's Pride" with him honestly.

Templar9999

The real shame of what's going on proves that he hasn't been using his best resource. The cards. The utility they offer is SO much greater than just a elaborate inventory. He should be going full gamer and creating healing salves, unlimited ammo anti armor guns, light weight body armor, etc. And that's just using what he has available easily on the streets in Gotham. He has shown no creativity, and that has caught up to him.

Antares

Are you talking about the bit where he refuses to take the drugs the doctor wants him to take? If so ye, it's dumb but Vergil is pathologically obsessed with self-control. Anything that could even mess with his mind even if it's for a short time or for his own good is a no-go. It's not exactly the smartest thing but expecting everyone to be 100% logical/rational is a bit dumb.

Hrathen

Maybe he shouldve planned it better. Like work for the penguin while taking advantage of the support network to get buff. Then no matter how much he's in debt, once he's strong enough, kill the penguin

Garend

What a fucking manchild. He can't even keep himself fed? Now's the time to be downing every supplement he can get his hands on, and bulking out, not skipping meals. How does he expect to chase people down and fight with them, keep going and work his way up to more demanding jobs if he can't even maintain himself? This man has no ability to think beyond a day or two. What the fuck...


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