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See No Evil: A Hard Choice (ch. 4)

🕑 Added 2020-07-22 15:02:33 +0000 UTC

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Eldar Zecore

I’m honestly curious about how much the Penguin actually knows about the Cards and Tifa. I mean, if he knew that the cards can seal things for easy transport and smuggling or combined/improve things I highly doubt he’d set the doubt at only 5 million, much less actually let Vergil live. That’s not even considering how insane the idea of Penguin of all villains having a way to kidnap people from outside of the DC multiverse. I think this might be a case of him having be asked to smuggle them into the city by our ROB, but having no idea what he was actually moving.

Trenton Robinson

OK, this is easily one of my Top 10 fanfics right now, and is also the grittiest. I agree that he’s not a good person, but he isn’t bad either, just too willing to survive and see things through for a normal hero. Definitely light-grey. Plus the potential of the cards is awesome. Haven’t read the story they’re from, but based off of comments and descriptions, they can be pretty damn good in DC. Could he do something like capture energy blasts and other non-solids? Plus, DC has various super experiments/science by the dozen, so potential improvements and combinations there. So much potential LOOT! Plus becoming a walking arsenal ASAP. I’m also really interested in what’s happened to his body, so far it’s just his temperature resistence, maybe a bit of unnatural coolness under pressure.

Sksk4128

Just an idea, I can see Tifa finding a way to strike back at Penguin and crime in general by roughing up certain gang members, gathering information and feeding info to Artemis or one of Bats informants. She's done similar things with the Seventh Heaven for Avalanche, shouldn't be too hard for her to get a job in a bar good looking girl knows how to mix drinks and can handle the guests if they get too rowdy or handsy

Antares

I've never seen these cards, what are they and where are they from?

Antares

True but I have a feeling that he should probably keep it a secret for as long as possible because if he shows this, he's probably going to bring a lot of heat onto him and I don't think Penguin will want to let him go at all.

TinyDeath

Can't wait to see him running the criminal underworld, then the world itself.

Sksk4128

Me thinks that Penguin will have you refining drugs for him with the cheap low quality stuff you can mass produce. Go from shitty dirt to crystal glass. Or maybe even doing it to make weird super chemicals like Kryptonite Venom for Bane.

Hrathen

I love this chapter and the ending. What he did cannot be excused no matter what. He killed in cold blood when his life was not being actively threatened. Therefore he cannot be a hero anymore

Antares

Honestly incredible well written, really looking forward to the next chapter and hope it comes out soon. This is shaping up to me my favourite of all your fics

Templar9999

You had my interest, now you have my attention. I wasnt expecting it to go in this direction, but this is really good. I cant wait to see what happens next. And the only time I've seen the cards used was in a worm fic. When he realizes he can create healing items, and more esoteric powers, things will get interesting.

Mkaius

This story is pretty fucking metal. The Mc is in so deep it’s gonna be a blast to watch him dig himself out.


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